Wednesday, May 28, 2008

Discribtion of my Final Product

I think my final product it a huge success and i like it because it is funny and colorful.
My product is about Tom's best christmas and it is all about the christmas spirt.
Some questions i want my peer to answer:
1) Does it amuse you?
2) Is it easy to read?
3) Is it colorful
4) In general do you like it?
5) What could i improve?

2 comments:

Dana... said...

This comment if from Nayla,
1) Does it amuse you?
2) Is it easy to read?
3) Is it colorful
4) In general do you like it?
5) What could i improve?
I really liked her comic strip. It was very intresting and creative. It amuses me. It has clear big reading and it is very colorful and attractive. In generali really liked it. I think you could improve it by just making your story a bit more intresting but other than that everything was perfect.
Amazing job Dana, Well done ;D

Dana... said...

this comment is from jana:
1) Does it amuse you?
2) Is it easy to read?
3) Is it colorful
4) In general do you like it?
5) What could i improve?

1.it amuses me very much because of the colours,characters and the idea of the story.

2.it is very easy to read all the text is clear,big enough and has clear colours to read from.

3.it is very colourful which is what it would make it eye catching.

4.i really like i enjoyed reading it.

5.you only need to improve some speeches to make it have more sense.